Just to let you guys know the stuff below is for this week's critique. Let me know what you think!
-Sarah
Milton, FL was established in 1844. Though I have lived in Milton my whole life, I haven't taken the time to really look at the area. With this series of photographs I will be documenting the discovery of my hometown through the people who live there and will allow for the photographs to speak for themselves. I will be using blurb.com to create my book. It will be 10x8, hardcover with a dust jacket. The book will consist of up to 20 pages of full bleed photographs.
I really like the new cover, the one with the sign that reads the title! The new photos are AMAZING! I can't wait to see the book! :D
ReplyDeletethe god mobile is very telling.
ReplyDeleteEven though I've never been to Milton before, I can definitely get a sense of the small town charm that is encompassed within Milton. I still like the photo of the two chairs in front of the building as a possibility for your front cover. Though, that’s just my opinion. If more people made comments then you could get a better critique as to possible directions that you can take with your front cover and your artist book. You are doing a great job overall!
ReplyDelete--Nick Miller
once again you make me see milton in a whole new light.
ReplyDeleteI like the new sign photo for the cover! Also, I agree with Nick that maybe you should highlight the quaint side without people in every shot. I am looking forward to seeing more in the fall!
ReplyDeleteElaine